ext_104691 ([identity profile] greyaenigma.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] jfb 2003-12-03 09:52 pm (UTC)

Just when you thought you didn't want to see any more stories...

Nice use of dramatic tension with the cut tags.
I noticed the guns that were securely locked in their upright position, three inches from my head.
This is figurative, I hope?


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